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 Post Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:14 pm 
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Hannah stood by the vending machine, and took a cup of coffee.
Justin had left, and had got a cab home to think
Ravi was looking through the photo album again, always stopping at the pictures of him and Nancy, where was she?
Nancy was shut in her bedroom, trying to sleep off the hurt she felt
Loretta cried silently in the bath, the break-up conversation had hurt her more then she knew.
Kris was sitting contently in his bedroom, and smiling at the day that had gone past.
Anita logged onto her computer, happy.
Theresa imed her: Hows Ravi? X
Anita: All good :D x
Theresa: PHEW ;)
Anita: Wanna see him tomorrow
Theresa: Sounds wkd Around 12ish?
Anita: I was going to say 9.00!
Theresa: Err, I don’t wake up at that time for less than £100. Im a model now
Anita: Newt doesn’t appreciate that does he
Theresa: you cant please everyone. Lloyd said it was a great idea
Anita: Lloyds fit
Theresa: YES.
Anita: Newt?
Theresa: that was going to be my next sentence. Newts better ;)
Anita: wicked.
Theresa: gotta go now, love ya x and you should go for lloyd..he obviously likes youuu
Anita: x
She was still happy, and then a message came up
Anon82: Paki
Anita: who is this?
Anon82: Your vile, disgusting
Anon82: Nobody will ever want you
Anon82: You have no friends, and we all know why
Anon82: Everyone can see your true colour.
Anita signed off in a panic, and shut her laptops lid, quivering. She hugged her knees to her chest and tears rolled down her cheeks. What was this person, and what did they mean?

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 Post Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:21 pm 
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:O

They were definatley worth the wait!!!
The break up was soo sad!!!
And when Ravi was looking though the photos, that was soo cute!
I loved it all! And i liked how you introduced someone internet bullying anita!
Great job!

Also sorry for the lack of updates on mine!
Ill start working on it abitt more from now on!

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Darren <3
Justin <3
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 Post Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 9:10 pm 
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omgoshhh chilling at the end :P x

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 Post Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:06 am 
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I am soooo behind on this fanfic, will have to catch up over the weekend and I will then comment :upup:


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 Post Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:17 am 
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Thank you for the comments everyone :D

And ahh wicked Hollyoaks Fan :))

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